Treatment Pitch and Feedback

The video is of the group and I presenting our treatment pitch to the rest of the class. This video shows feedback from the audience in which in tells what could be improved to our thoughts and ideas of our music video. The audience had asked many questions on our plans for the video and also most on its concept and we managed to answer the questions in the best way possible.

The audience liked the track 'Jealous Type' that we've chosen for the music video, which was good to hear as this age group is what we shall be appealing to as our targeted audience. My group and I didn't plan our pitch well as we were still at the stage of thinking what was the concept of the video and if we were going to make it narrative or performance. Also, the discussion of locations were brought up in our team meetings in lesson however they were not initial yet. This caused confusion to the audience on what we intended on doing for our music video and involved them asking even more questions which we try our best in answering. We've decided to add another female actor to the video considering the tracks narrative it suits the video well and would make more sense for the audience. but we are still in the process of doing so.

Therefore, my group and I really need to develop our plans for the video in which case we will be updating our treatment pitch with clear ideas and detailed plans of the video. I think that the audiences feedback has really helped my team and I to develop our ideas even more in order to make our video a success and has helped us see how important their feedback is as its best to know from someone elses perspective and making sure we meet our targets as an audience.